Thursday, October 14, 2010

PLN 10

I read the article "Health issue likely led to crash that killed Denver couple" in the Denver Post. What matters to me is that a man had heart complications that likely let to his car turning into a tree and flipping into a parking lot, killing him and his wife. This is important because it makes me wonder exactly what happened that day that made that car crash. The police department concluded that the man died of heart disease and his wife died of injury's acquired at the scene of the crash. Further information will be released when more information is known. I think this should lead to further research into heart disease so that we can prevent this from ever happening again. If we can prevent death from not only the diseased but the Innocent people with the diseased people than we can prevent a lot of known deaths in the United States.

2 comments:

  1. JOhn- this is a good start, but you are missing some components to a well written paragraph. First of all, hyperlink to the original text and state what matters in the topic sentence. Make sure to connect your entry to you, to education and to the world. Also, you need to proofread your entry.

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  2. Good qustion but yuor speech was a little short

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